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This took a rather long while, if you can't tell it's Cyrus and Kaiya. (Yes, I know there are many things probably wrong with this picture that I would like pointed out if possible). Two of my favorite characters from Rynnay's gallery.

The characters are copyright :iconrynnay:

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:iconkirielson:
Your artsyle is good, but you need to learn a bit about shading. From what I'm looking at, you're working with either a tablet or a ballpoint pen. That's fine and dandy but there's not enough contrast to make it look scruffy. [link]

See, there's enough detail to make it look like the scruffy hair.

Don't shade in beards, instead make hard, soft, long and short strokes and even in between the mixes of strands overlapping in order to get the effect.

Also, work a bit on light tone. Just show contrast between where the light is and isn't showing.

(And I am critiquing art when I can't even draw realism. :D)
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Actually that was pencil... :(
Anyways I shall take that to note and hey, even if you don't work realism neither do I but good god critique can still help. Believe me and sorry it took so long to get back to this, I've been veeeery busy the past days.

Also yeah... I probably should have used a color and not a black and white reference. Anyways thanks for the critique and I'll check out your new stuff if you have some(I know you have new stories but what about art?)
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Need to work on that. :D

Trust me, there's some stuff coming down the pipe soon. :D
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What the fuck is this shit?

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